The Terrible Two Get Worse
by Mac Barnett (Author), Jory John (Author), and Kevin Cornell (Illustrator)
Booktalk: The BIG Picture
On their own, pranksters Miles and Niles were pretty devious. Now that they’ve formed a pranking duo, they’re terrible! But their powers will be tested when their favorite nemesis, Principal Barkin, is replaced by his stern and cunning father, Former Principal Barkin. Now Miles and Niles will do just about anything to get their old antagonist back–including pranking alongside him.
#kidlit Writing Lesson: the small details
As the boys prepare for their first prank, the story jumps back and forth between dialogue . . .
“I’m bringing a gas mask,” said Miles. “And I’ll bring one for you too. I’ll bet you want it tomorrow.”
. . . and description . . .
Which is how we got here.
Back to dialogue . . .
“Are you sure you don’t want one?” Miles asked.
“Yes.”
. . .and more description . . .
Niles pulled a clothespin out of his pocket and used it to clip his nostrils shut. He winced a little, because it hurt.
Followed by more dialogue . . .
“The gas mask would be way more comfortable,” said Miles.
Notice that each segment of dialogue or description is short and to the point.
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