Growing Writers

Growing Writers:

Everyone has a story to tell. My goal as a writing teacher is to help my students tell their stories. The help each writer needs depends on where they are on the writing continuum. I have taught kindergarten to college so I have worked with writers in all six stages of writing.

  1. Imitation (preschool to first grade)
  2. Graphic Presentation (first and second grade)
  3. Progressive Incorporation (late second to fourth grade)
  4. Automatization (fourth to seventh grade)
  5. Elaboration (seventh to ninth grade)
  6. Personalization-Diversification (ninth grade and beyond)

Although the mastery of the mechanics of language varies greatly from stage to stage, one thing remains the same: writers want to share their stories.

It’s how those stories are told that evolves. In the first two stages, young writers don’t plan ahead. They simply write down what comes to mind. Focusing on grammar, spelling, and punctuation at the start can turn storytelling into frustrating work, not personal expression. It’s all in the timing.

Allow young writers to express their ideas first, and save the final editing steps (grammar, spelling, and punctuation) for the very end. The first draft is called the sloppy copy for a reason. It’s NOT perfect — it’s ideas written down on a page.

If your young writers are in the last four developmental stages, they can go back to a sloppy copy and make it into a final copy. Writers in the very early stages, however, simply don’t think that way yet. Their first draft is their only draft. It is not until late second grade that young writers are ready to go back and make changes to their work — and that’s okay. Growing a writer takes time.

The Six Traits of Writing:

If you are working with writers who are old enough for you to begin helping them edit their own work, let the six traits of writing guide you. The six traits of writing were identified in the 1980s as a way to help young writers look at their own writing. They are:

  1. Ideas
  2. Organization
  3. Voice
  4. Word Choice
  5. Sentence Fluency
  6. Conventions (grammar, spelling, and punctuation)

When you give writing feedback to help your young writers edit their work, talk about ONE trait per editing session. Too much feedback at once can be overwhelming.

Read–Think–Write

When I teach a writing workshop for any age, I always begin with mentor texts. First we read. Then we think out loud and talk about what they want to write. Only after these reading and thinking and talking steps, will I ask my students to begin writing.

Writers grow from Imitation (in preschool) to Personalization (in high school and beyond). At each of the six stages of writing, reading and thinking and talking come first. Skipping the pre-writing step, the reading and thinking and talking steps of the writing process, leads to writer’s block. Why frustrate yourself?

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Writers can’t tell a story without words. Begin your writing workshop with mentor texts. Then ask your writers to think and talk about the story they want to tell with the writing prompt.

Although some students can write without a writing prompt, others find an open-ended “call to write” extremely difficult. They need more guidance to help them decide what they want to say. On the other hand, a writing prompt that is narrow in scope may frustrate other students. (It’s hard to write about something you have never experienced.) The best prompts for young writers tap into universal experiences for their age.

Thinking out loud by talking to a peer about what you want to write is a simple form of pre-writing that even the youngest writer can do. If your writers are in stage three or above, they can revise their work with multiple drafts. That means you can ask them to share their first draft with a peer editor and talk about next steps.

Peering editing gives both students the opportunity to act as editors as well. After both peer editors have written a new draft of their own work, they can “publish” their work by reading the final version in their notebooks to each other. In this way, writers in elementary school can experience all five steps of the writing process:

  1. Pre-writing
  2. Drafting
  3. Revising
  4. Editing
  5. Publishing

I’ve used these steps with writers in elementary school, junior high, high school, college, and writing workshops for adults online and in bookstores, libraries, and conferences. These steps are classroom-tested! Now you can use them in your classroom or library, too.

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